http://www.aikida.net/2008/08/04/the-some-sort-of-holiday-strip/ Relatively stupid. Stupidly relative. Updates M/W/F Fri, 21 Nov 2008 22:32:31 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 http://www.aikida.net/2008/08/04/the-some-sort-of-holiday-strip/#comment-374 sykomantis Wed, 13 Aug 2008 09:39:09 +0000 http://www.aikida.net/?p=44#comment-374 I've been looking at your art for a while and I've finally figured out what was bothering me about it. The right breast. Breasts don't really look like that. The breast is a continuation of the pectoral muscles which connect to the collar bone, the sternum, and the upper arm. There should be an indication of where her armpit is. The way you have it, it comes off as her armpit being convex instead of concave. The line at the bottom of the breast should continue to our left to create the illusion of an armpit and pectoral muscles instead of coming around to make an almost complete circle. <a>here</a> is a tutorial that might help you. Also, I'm guessing that Sydney is pretty skinny. If she is, her breasts wouldn't be that round, unless they were implants. Just some critiques and observations. I’ve been looking at your art for a while and I’ve finally figured out what was bothering me about it. The right breast. Breasts don’t really look like that. The breast is a continuation of the pectoral muscles which connect to the collar bone, the sternum, and the upper arm. There should be an indication of where her armpit is. The way you have it, it comes off as her armpit being convex instead of concave. The line at the bottom of the breast should continue to our left to create the illusion of an armpit and pectoral muscles instead of coming around to make an almost complete circle. here is a tutorial that might help you. Also, I’m guessing that Sydney is pretty skinny. If she is, her breasts wouldn’t be that round, unless they were implants. Just some critiques and observations.

]]> http://www.aikida.net/2008/08/04/the-some-sort-of-holiday-strip/#comment-334 WiZz Wed, 06 Aug 2008 05:25:52 +0000 http://www.aikida.net/?p=44#comment-334 i like it. it's like a slightly sexier version of the pepper one. just because of the bikini over a one piece. i did donate, wish paypal wasn't slow. i like it. it’s like a slightly sexier version of the pepper one. just because of the bikini over a one piece. i did donate, wish paypal wasn’t slow.

]]> http://www.aikida.net/2008/08/04/the-some-sort-of-holiday-strip/#comment-330 Josh Mon, 04 Aug 2008 23:53:44 +0000 http://www.aikida.net/?p=44#comment-330 Lightfoot: Thanks, I was actually just resizing it to fit in the panel, sized a bit too big and liked the effect. sildefac: Probably not! Lightfoot: Thanks, I was actually just resizing it to fit in the panel, sized a bit too big and liked the effect.
sildefac: Probably not!

]]> http://www.aikida.net/2008/08/04/the-some-sort-of-holiday-strip/#comment-329 silfedac Mon, 04 Aug 2008 23:36:31 +0000 http://www.aikida.net/?p=44#comment-329 I'm starting to think that reading this comic in the family room isn't such a hot idea. I’m starting to think that reading this comic in the family room isn’t such a hot idea.

]]> http://www.aikida.net/2008/08/04/the-some-sort-of-holiday-strip/#comment-328 Anon Mon, 04 Aug 2008 23:10:09 +0000 http://www.aikida.net/?p=44#comment-328 Bringing some sun in a rainy day! Thanks! Bringing some sun in a rainy day!
Thanks!

]]> http://www.aikida.net/2008/08/04/the-some-sort-of-holiday-strip/#comment-327 Lightfoot Mon, 04 Aug 2008 23:00:22 +0000 http://www.aikida.net/?p=44#comment-327 The layout for the picture was very well thought-out. I like how her head overlaps the comic border. The layout for the picture was very well thought-out. I like how her head overlaps the comic border.

]]> http://www.aikida.net/2008/08/04/the-some-sort-of-holiday-strip/#comment-325 Jared Mon, 04 Aug 2008 18:17:10 +0000 http://www.aikida.net/?p=44#comment-325 She doesn't need to look happy. WOO. She doesn’t need to look happy. WOO.

]]> http://www.aikida.net/2008/08/04/the-some-sort-of-holiday-strip/#comment-323 Dwight Mon, 04 Aug 2008 17:19:59 +0000 http://www.aikida.net/?p=44#comment-323 She doesn't look to happy... She doesn’t look to happy…

]]> http://www.aikida.net/2008/08/04/the-some-sort-of-holiday-strip/#comment-321 Nero Mon, 04 Aug 2008 17:15:26 +0000 http://www.aikida.net/?p=44#comment-321 YAY CIVIL HOLIDAY! YAY CIVIL HOLIDAY!

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